Why
many people want to use diesel engine? Today diesel engine is used by many
people such European. They are using it to automobiles such car, they think that
is using diesel engine economical. As a result, if they go to traveling, they
not spend much money to buy fuel, because of the cost it cheap. Diesel engine
is common use by vehicles such as; trucks, trains, buses and etc. then, in the
family, diesel engine is also used by electric generating plant. Moreover
diesel engine is used by fisherman too. For fisher man, diesel engine is used
by ship for looking for sailing in the sea. This diesel engine continues to
produce million quantities all over the world to help people that are using automobiles.
Next, the reasons why the people want to use diesel engine.
First
of reason, using of diesel engine is able to walk away. For example, a person
goes to medan city, he stars from his hometown. Distance between his home town
and Medan city needs 18 hours. Not all engines which are able to walk at
distance very far, but diesel engine is able to does it. Because of diesel
engine has strong endurance. The second reason, using diesel engine is able to deliver
25 to 30 percent better fuel economy than gasoline engine. Everybody wants to
get lucky of his work. For example, driver of bus who is used diesel engine
because of cost of fuel is cheap, cost of one liter gasoline 6,000 while cost
of one liter diesel fuel is 5,000. So, they still have money about 1,000. Then,
using of diesel engine has many useful not all for driving, but also useful for
passenger. For example, a student who is study at state university negeri
Padang which is has distance from her home and Campus needs an hour. Meanwhile,
cost from MKU to Campus FBS that is need 15 minutes spend 3,000 if a passenger
of motorcycle, let alone go to Tabing.
so, what is your conclusion of your writing?
BalasHapus1. your title is advantages and disadvantages of diesel engine. It should be advantages and disadvantages of using diesel engine.
BalasHapus2. you didn't explain about the disadvantages.
3. your thesis statement's sentence is not effective yet.
4. "stars" in paragraph 2 line 2 should be "starts"
5. you should put verb 1 after "to". It becomes to do it, not to does it. (paragraph 2 line 4)
good writing :D
BalasHapussuggestion for your writing: you should develop your writing or your idea more.