Kamis, 19 September 2013

MOUSE DEER and SQUIRREL



MOUSE DEER and SQUIRREL

          Mouse deer and Squirrel were friends. They were always together. Another animal talked about their togetherness because wherever the squirrel, there was also mouse deer went there. Mouse deer and squirrel were traveling in the jungle. They were surrounded it until find something that useful. On the way squirrel tired that did not impossible to walk continue and also squirrel wanted eat something as a prop his stomach. There is a banana tree in the field of farmer and there was beautiful scenery. Then, mouse deer talked to squirrel,” hi…hi squirrel, there were some banana in field of farmer, did you see, squirrel?,” the squirrel answer,” yes, I saw let us took it. They went to find of banana and squirrel climbed directly in the banana tree whereas mouse deer just waited under the tree because he could not climb.
Several times, squirrel enjoyed eating banana on the banana tree whereas the mouse deer waited high expectation. Then mouse deer talked to squirrel,” hi friend, I did get anything.” Then the squirrel answer,” I never promise with you to divide it for you, I am sorry friend.” Mouse deer fed up with squirrel. Several times, the banana fell as a result squirrel did not get it. Then squirrel did go down and took of bananas. Mouse deer was angry with squirrel as a result they fought.
At the moment the monkey was walking, he came across with mouse deer and squirrel. Then he was meet them and asked to them,” what was going here?.” The mouse deer told dishonest to the monkey. The monkey became a judge among them. Therefore, the monkey suggested those bananas for weighing. Both of them agreed with the monkey. The monkey ate the banana heavier. The monkey did it continue. Finally, the bananas ate through by the monkey. Mouse deer and squirrel did not get anything and they were regret dead of them that did not want to divide.

7 komentar:

  1. it's a good story, especially for whom who don't know the meaning of the true friends ()

    BalasHapus
  2. very nice story ^_^
    i like your story
    keep writing Soliha

    BalasHapus
  3. Nice story Soliha, but i think you use too many simple sentences. I would be better if you combine two sentences that related each other. You can use compound and complex sentences.

    BalasHapus
  4. my comment is that you have to pay closed attention to your grammar. keep trying!

    BalasHapus